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易服小天后

鉛筆仿山水畫;故意5用透視法,話說我令年中4 我個老師又一味有讚無彈,所以請大家比D意見。

易服小天后

張畫摺過

waiking

易服小天后 發表於 2011-11-5 11:09
鉛筆仿山水畫;故意5用透視法,話說我令年中4 我個老師又一味有讚無彈,所以請大家比D意見。 ...

張畫畫得唔錯，但同山水畫比就差好多層次，用鉛筆畫山水好困難，呢張畫你用咗幾多支筆畫架

易服小天后

我只係用左一支HP鉛筆去畫

waiking

易服小天后 發表於 2011-11-5 11:56
我只係用左一支HP鉛筆去畫

唔怪之得

HAMAN

waiking 發表於 2011-11-5 12:13
唔怪之得

有改善空間
如果宏觀D嚟睇
加D顏色會豐富D
但鉛筆畫都有鉛筆晝風格
- 抄自香港曾垃圾口吻

多練習

易服小天后

回樓上，兩者都係視覺藝術

waiking

煩惱 發表於 2011-11-5 14:25
呢區係 " 攝影研究 " 喎 .............

都可以拉得埋嚟講嘅

jinjinjinjin

都幾好呢,好有味道

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煩惱 發表於 2011-11-5 14:25
呢區係 " 攝影研究 " 喎 .............

難得小天后咁正經，由得佢啦！

完全自由

畫嘅野我真係唔識，但覺得上半部份乜都冇，有d怪怪地咁囉...

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煩惱 發表於 2011-11-5 16:34
我抽水你又抽我水...

為左1分威望分我乜都做得出架！

Retired

May I ask how long did you use to draw such nice painting using a pencil?

易服小天后

fullmetal1 發表於 2011-11-5 17:01
May I ask how long did you use to draw such nice painting using a pencil?

一個中頭

benny2

易服小天后 發表於 2011-11-5 11:09
鉛筆仿山水畫;故意5用透視法,話說我令年中4 我個老師又一味有讚無彈,所以請大家比D意見。 ...

個白平衡咁得意嘅? 你用電筒照住嚟影相?

幫你 tune 一 tune, 易睇啲.

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benny2 發表於 2011-11-5 18:21
個白平衡咁得意嘅? 你用電筒照住嚟影相?

幫你 tune 一 tune, 易睇啲.

當堂靚好多！

佩服佩服！

BECKHAM2

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haha, photographic comment to this photo.

and in term of photocopy skill, except the WB issue, the painting is distorted.

BECKHAM2

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is that painting completed? why leave the empty at the upper part?

the drawing of the plant is nice, but seems not realistic, looks like several specimen(標本) oeverlap together

BECKHAM2

煩惱 發表於 2011-11-5 13:12
恕我直言 ...

Yes, painting is not photography but I now really like to receive more comment from an artists.
I'm welcome more contribution from an artists, someone good at visual art.

benny2

BECKHAM2 發表於 2011-11-5 19:06
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haha, photographic comment to this photo.

A second thought, the blue tone could have been an expression... Who knows?