TSA小三的英文科作文題

米高奧雲

各位C hing可否作一篇範文,給小朋友參考可以嗎??
30字

馬後砲

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死火!  考起 !  請幫手先 !  

waiking

鷹門九唔電喎

Williamho1953

I am Tom. My teacher tells today is classroom cleaning day. My classmates and me help to sweep with towel and broom. There has a fly. I kill it bravely.

kingkong_hk

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純粹惡搞

Today is  cleaning day, when I sweep the  black board, a  fly flies around, I kick it's ass. Then we go to nightclub happily.

馬後砲

Williamho1953 發表於 2013-4-19 11:35
I am Tom. My teacher tells today is classroom cleaning day. My classmates and me help to sweep with  ...

小三准唔准用PAST TENSE 架 ?

kingkong_hk

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唔好2C, 玩過龍

Williamho1953

馬後砲 發表於 2013-4-19 12:51
小三准唔准用PAST TENSE 架 ?

題目是present tense - "Tom helps to clean his classroom today".

oldcake

Williamho1953 發表於 2013-4-19 11:35
I am Tom. My teacher tells today is classroom cleaning day. My classmates and me help to sweep with  ...

果隻係Bee唔係Fly......女生見到Fly唔會喊

Williamho1953

oldcake 發表於 2013-4-19 14:21
果隻係Bee唔係Fly......女生見到Fly唔會喊

The word in the box is "fly".

oldcake

我又作, 不過我唔多識英文, 下次作中文好d:
Today is my classroom cleaning day, we help to sweep the classroom. Suddenly, a bee flies in, the classmates are so scaring......of course, I run away immediately because I am scaring too!

oldcake

Williamho1953 發表於 2013-4-19 14:29
The word in the box is "fly".

所以我用"a bee flies in"......點睇果隻都係似蜜蜂多d

馬後砲

kingkong_hk 發表於 2013-4-19 12:57
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唔好2C, 玩過龍

NO PROBLEM LA

馬後砲

這是一位教過小三英文的老師model answer:

Tom helps to clean his classroom with his classmates today. They sweep the floor, clean the desks and the blackboard. A bee flies and his classmates are afraid. Tom uses the broom to make it fly away. His classmates thank him very much.

補充內容 (2013-4-20 10:05):
對小三同學,會唔會太難 ?

Williamho1953

馬後砲 發表於 2013-4-20 10:02
這是一位教過小三英文的老師model answer:

Tom helps to clean his classroom with his classmates toda ...

The question asks to answer in about 30 words. Now the model answer is 43 words. You may say exceed 13 words is not much. Imagine your professor asks you to write a thesis in 3000 words and you give him a 4300 thesis.

馬後砲

Williamho1953 發表於 2013-4-20 10:38
The question asks to answer in about 30 words. Now the model answer is 43 words. You may say excee ...

要改唔難,講少的野者
Tom helps to clean his classroom with his classmates today. They sweep the floor, clean the desks and the blackboard. A bee flies and his classmates are afraid. Tom drives it away.
寫多左,老師好少扣分, 寫少就唔得

jayzhou_2046

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利害! 咁細粒嘢都可以分得出係蜜蜂定烏蠅! 高!

jayzhou_2046

唔通蜜蜂大個隻烏蠅好多架!

好叻喎! Excellent! 非常巧!

馬後砲

jayzhou_2046 發表於 2013-4-20 13:34
唔通蜜蜂大個隻烏蠅好多架!

好叻喎! Excellent! 非常巧!

咁蜜蜂實在系大隻過烏蠅好多架 !

oldcake

馬後砲 發表於 2013-4-20 10:50
要改唔難,講少的野者
Tom helps to clean his classroom with his classmates today. They sweep  ...

炮少餅對番文真係有兩手，老餅就點攪都攪唔清！我其實唔知點分afraid, scare同frighten！
以前我公司有個鬼佬做Cheif Editor，佢答email果時我真係好多時攪唔清，記得一個例子，可拿出來分享：
我問佢某事是否同意，佢有時會答"OK with me", 但有時答"OK to me", 本來都無乜問題，知佢答OK就得喇。
但係當佢問我意見時，我就真係唔知答佢"OK with me"定係"OK to me"好，話哂我都係佢上司，唔好意思比佢知我咁無料，最後無哂計，唯有硬著頭皮問！