I am Tom. My teacher tells today is classroom cleaning day. My classmates and me help to sweep with towel and broom. There has a fly. I kill it bravely.
我又作, 不過我唔多識英文, 下次作中文好d:
Today is my classroom cleaning day, we help to sweep the classroom. Suddenly, a bee flies in, the classmates are so scaring......of course, I run away immediately because I am scaring too!
Tom helps to clean his classroom with his classmates today. They sweep the floor, clean the desks and the blackboard. A bee flies and his classmates are afraid. Tom uses the broom to make it fly away. His classmates thank him very much.
Tom helps to clean his classroom with his classmates toda ...
The question asks to answer in about 30 words. Now the model answer is 43 words. You may say exceed 13 words is not much. Imagine your professor asks you to write a thesis in 3000 words and you give him a 4300 thesis.
The question asks to answer in about 30 words. Now the model answer is 43 words. You may say excee ...
要改唔難,講少的野者
Tom helps to clean his classroom with his classmates today. They sweep the floor, clean the desks and the blackboard. A bee flies and his classmates are afraid. Tom drives it away.
寫多左,老師好少扣分, 寫少就唔得
要改唔難,講少的野者
Tom helps to clean his classroom with his classmates today. They sweep ...
炮少餅對番文真係有兩手，老餅就點攪都攪唔清！我其實唔知點分afraid, scare同frighten！
以前我公司有個鬼佬做Cheif Editor，佢答email果時我真係好多時攪唔清，記得一個例子，可拿出來分享：
我問佢某事是否同意，佢有時會答"OK with me", 但有時答"OK to me", 本來都無乜問題，知佢答OK就得喇。
但係當佢問我意見時，我就真係唔知答佢"OK with me"定係"OK to me"好，話哂我都係佢上司，唔好意思比佢知我咁無料，最後無哂計，唯有硬著頭皮問！
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