小三TSA的英文科作文題2

米高奧雲

學校又派了另一份練習給小朋友,又要麻煩眾英文高手師兄弄一份model answer了
謝謝!

pacificlub

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Normally not such model answer, just remind yourself the "tense" is present tense, 4 photos means each photo around 8 words to describe....i will write like:

"Today, I go to Happy Farm with my parents.  We take a lot of photos inside the garden.  I see some children throw stones to harm (or hurt) the ducks.  I am very angry and stop them all at once."

Around 38 words.  Simple sentenses!!!

馬後砲

今次另作安排，把題目打印了出來帶給一位五年級生做。
這两天可以有答案了。

oldcake

馬後砲 發表於 2013-4-23 09:35

                               
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今次另作安排，把題目打印了出來帶給一位五年級生做。
這两天可以有答案了。 ...

Good idea......我又試吓比老餅仔做, 不過佢只係小二.

bon168

pacificlub 發表於 2013-4-22 21:31

                               
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Normally not such model answer, just remind yourself the "tense" is present ...

good answer


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馬後砲

馬後砲 發表於 2013-4-23 09:35

                               
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今次另作安排，把題目打印了出來帶給一位五年級生做。
這两天可以有答案了。 ...

Sam goes to Happy Farm with his parents.  He looks at the corn, carrots, strawberries and watermelons.  Two children throw stones into the pond.  Sam is angry and tells them it hurts the ducks.  The children say sorry and leave.

明顯地五年級生識得較多字，詞

aeagle

It is hard to write!!! It is hard to write!!!